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	<title>Comments on: Step 1 of Editing a Novel</title>
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	<description>Book reviews &#38; writing tips from a wannabe YA writer</description>
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		<title>By: Kelly</title>
		<link>http://yannabe.com/2009/04/06/step-1-of-editing-a-novel/comment-page-1/#comment-54</link>
		<dc:creator>Kelly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Apr 2009 21:05:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m loving what I&#039;m reading about layering. Sounds much less overwhelming than trying to look for everything all at once.

Emily, I honestly never thought of trying that before! Really cool idea. Have you tried it? What sorts of things did it help you find?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m loving what I&#8217;m reading about layering. Sounds much less overwhelming than trying to look for everything all at once.</p>
<p>Emily, I honestly never thought of trying that before! Really cool idea. Have you tried it? What sorts of things did it help you find?</p>
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		<title>By: Emily</title>
		<link>http://yannabe.com/2009/04/06/step-1-of-editing-a-novel/comment-page-1/#comment-53</link>
		<dc:creator>Emily</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Apr 2009 17:46:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I would actually try writing out excerpts by hand - you might find the flow too be totally different than the typed version.  It&#039;s worth a shot.  The medium is in the message, right?

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Emily’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://chornomore.blogspot.com/2009/04/gender-roles.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Gender roles&lt;/A&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I would actually try writing out excerpts by hand &#8211; you might find the flow too be totally different than the typed version.  It&#8217;s worth a shot.  The medium is in the message, right?</p>
<p><abbr><em>Emily’s last blog post..<a href="http://chornomore.blogspot.com/2009/04/gender-roles.html" rel="nofollow">Gender roles</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Kelly</title>
		<link>http://yannabe.com/2009/04/06/step-1-of-editing-a-novel/comment-page-1/#comment-52</link>
		<dc:creator>Kelly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Apr 2009 14:16:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Alexa, thanks! I&#039;ll check those out right now...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alexa, thanks! I&#8217;ll check those out right now&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Alexa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alexa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Apr 2009 15:58:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I found this post quite helpful and went for option 5, which seems to be working.

http://lianabrooks.blogspot.com/2009/02/editing.html

And this post on layering is helpful too.

http://theinnocentflower.blogspot.com/2009/03/working-in-layers.html

Good Luck :)

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Alexa’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://notenoughbookshelves.blogspot.com/2009/04/book-review-saving-francesca.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Book Review Saving Francesca&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I found this post quite helpful and went for option 5, which seems to be working.</p>
<p><a href="http://lianabrooks.blogspot.com/2009/02/editing.html" rel="nofollow">http://lianabrooks.blogspot.com/2009/02/editing.html</a></p>
<p>And this post on layering is helpful too.</p>
<p><a href="http://theinnocentflower.blogspot.com/2009/03/working-in-layers.html" rel="nofollow">http://theinnocentflower.blogspot.com/2009/03/working-in-layers.html</a></p>
<p>Good Luck <img src='http://yannabe.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p><abbr><em>Alexa’s last blog post..<a href="http://notenoughbookshelves.blogspot.com/2009/04/book-review-saving-francesca.html" rel="nofollow">Book Review Saving Francesca</a></em></abbr></p>
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