Book reviews & writing tips from a wannabe YA writer
Title: Beautiful Americans
Author: Lucy Silag
Category: Fiction, Young Adult
Why I Read It: It released in 2009, and I was in the mood for something new.
Summary: Four American teens travel to Paris for a year-long study program.
Stopped on Page: 42
Why I Stopped: I lost patience with all the points of view in this book. The chapters alternate among each of the 4 main characters telling their story. I actually gave up before I got to the first chapter for the fourth character, but I wasn’t connecting with any of the other main characters.
Probably contributing to that lack of connection was that the dialogue sounded a little stilted to me. A small example:
“So, what’s your name, anyway?”“Penelope Jane Fletcher,” she says, putting her passport on the counter so that the clerk can type in her name and information. “But you can call me PJ. Why are you doing this for me?”
I know it’s been a few years since my teenage days, but how PJ introduces herself struck me as not so realistic.
Should I have kept going? Or was I right to stop?
Note: As an aspiring author, I respect the extraordinary amount of effort that goes into writing a book. I did not write this review in order to be unfair or negative about the book. My goal is simply to articulate why the book wasn’t for me.
Title: Something, Maybe
Author: Elizabeth Scott
Category: Fiction, Young Adult
Rating: 2.5/5
Why I Read It: Because you told me to!
Summary: 17-year-old Hannah tries not to get noticed. But with a mom who makes a living wearing skimpy clothes in front of a webcam, and an estranged 70-year-old dad with a reality TV show featuring him and scantily clad “special girls,” it can be hard not to come across as a freak. When Hannah finally wants someone to notice her—namely her crush Josh—will the right things get noticed?
Review: This was a sweet story. I really wanted to fall in love with it like other YA book bloggers are doing, but I didn’t. I didn’t dislike it, but it was just okay for me.
Putting on my YA-nnabe hat, here are the reasons I think this one fell short:
On the other hand, it’s hard to beat a first line like this!
Everyone’s seen my mother naked.
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I’m picky when it comes to book reviews. I usually have to sneak reading them in 10-minute stints while my 1-year-old daughter entertains herself by pulling everything out of a drawer and spreading it over every square inch of the kitchen floor. Since I have to glance back every minute or so to make sure she hasn’t unearthed a plastic bag or an airplane bottle of liquor, some types of reviews get read by me and others not so much.
I know I’m not alone in this. A lot of us aren’t able to dutifully read every word of every blog we subscribe to. I try to keep this in mind when writing book reviews myself, and in the spirit of D.U.O.A.Y.W.H.T.D.U.Y., I’ve developed a list of guidelines I use to try to meet the needs of the wide range of reading needs.
Example: 1morechapter.com
Example: Fyrefly’s Book Blog
Example: propernoun.net
But every reader is different. What do you look for in a good book review? What guidelines do you have for yourself when writing a book review?
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I’m down to 2 suggestions in my little Skribit box to the right—just waiting for both to come in at the library. I have a handful of 2009 releases checked out, but I’m getting dangerously low.
I’ve really enjoyed this setup whereby you tell me what to do, and no actual thinking is required of me in picking my next books. More, please!
To add your recommendation, enter a title under “What should I read next?” C’mon, how often does someone listen when you tell them what to do?
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Title: Wintergirls
Author: Laurie Halse Anderson
Category: Fiction, Young Adult
Rating: 5/5
Why I Read It: Because everyone was raving about it, among other reasons.
Summary: Lia and her best friend Cassie made a pact to become skinny together. But then Cassie drops Lia, and a few months later Lia finds out Cassie has been found dead.
Review: I didn’t want to read this. I knew what it was about—a girl with an eating disorder—and I didn’t want to knowingly subject myself to that world of pain.
But then I went to my favorite locally owned bookstore to hear Laurie Halse Anderson speak. I got there too early and didn’t have anything to read with me, so I picked up Wintergirls and read the first 15 pages. It took all my self control to put it back on the shelf and wait for it to come in at my library.
I finished this book in less than 24 hours, on a workday no less. Lia was so real to me that when I wasn’t actually reading, she’s all I could think about: Would she pull through? How long til she hit bottom? Would it be too late?
Lia’s story haunted me because I know that countless girls out there have stories just like hers. Now that I have a daughter, this issue hits close to home. I can’t protect her from the impossible idea of “beauty” on TV, in magazines, from other kids. What can I do as a parent to foster a healthy body image? I really don’t know.
Reading Lia’s story convinced me that not knowing the answer to that question is unacceptable. So if you know of any good nonfiction books on this topic, please let me know.
I highly recommend this amazing book. And when you’re done reading it yourself, lend your copy to a parent you know.
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