Comments on: Review: The First Five Pages http://yannabe.com/2009/05/21/review-the-first-five-pages/ Book reviews & writing tips from a wannabe YA writer Sat, 17 Mar 2012 10:42:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Kelly http://yannabe.com/2009/05/21/review-the-first-five-pages/comment-page-1/#comment-263 Kelly Tue, 26 May 2009 02:15:29 +0000 http://yannabe.com/?p=834#comment-263 Heather, I really think you'll like that other book, especially if you kind of stalled out on this one. They say a lot of the same things (although each of them have some unique points). Hope you like it! Heather, I really think you’ll like that other book, especially if you kind of stalled out on this one. They say a lot of the same things (although each of them have some unique points). Hope you like it!

]]> By: Kelly http://yannabe.com/2009/05/21/review-the-first-five-pages/comment-page-1/#comment-262 Kelly Tue, 26 May 2009 02:13:29 +0000 http://yannabe.com/?p=834#comment-262 Alexa, I keep meaning to get Writing the Breakout Novel. Added to my library hold list NOW. :-) Alexa, I keep meaning to get Writing the Breakout Novel. Added to my library hold list NOW. :-)

]]> By: Heather http://yannabe.com/2009/05/21/review-the-first-five-pages/comment-page-1/#comment-252 Heather Sun, 24 May 2009 22:41:04 +0000 http://yannabe.com/?p=834#comment-252 I've had this book on my shelf for about three months and have been "in neutral" at the exercise for chapter one. It says to do the exercises before progressing (and I'm a stickler) for following the rules, so I've put it down. (I agree about the over-the-top examples.) Maybe I'll need to check out the other book that you preferred. <abbr><em>Heather’s last blog post..<a href="http://literaturecrazy.blogspot.com/2009/05/book-review-mysteries-of-pittsburg.html" rel="nofollow">Book Review: The Mysteries of Pittsburg</a></abbr></em> I’ve had this book on my shelf for about three months and have been “in neutral” at the exercise for chapter one. It says to do the exercises before progressing (and I’m a stickler) for following the rules, so I’ve put it down. (I agree about the over-the-top examples.)

Maybe I’ll need to check out the other book that you preferred.

Heather’s last blog post..Book Review: The Mysteries of Pittsburg

]]> By: Alexa http://yannabe.com/2009/05/21/review-the-first-five-pages/comment-page-1/#comment-250 Alexa Sun, 24 May 2009 17:12:31 +0000 http://yannabe.com/?p=834#comment-250 It depends how good it is, I devoured Writing the Breakout novel. Thanks for the reviews I'll look into self editing. <abbr><em>Alexa’s last blog post..<a href="http://notenoughbookshelves.blogspot.com/2009/05/fourth-comings.html" rel="nofollow">Fourth Comings</a></abbr></em> It depends how good it is, I devoured Writing the Breakout novel. Thanks for the reviews I’ll look into self editing.

Alexa’s last blog post..Fourth Comings

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