Book reviews & writing tips from a wannabe YA writer
Title: The Artful Edit: On the Practice of Editing Yourself
Author: Susan Bell
Category: Nonfiction
Rating: 3/5
Why I Read It: I found this book while browsing the writing section of the library.
Summary: An editor offers advice on how to edit your own writing.
Review: I loved the first half of this book for its practicality, but as it got less practical I lost interest. Example:
One little gem was the author’s tips for gaining perspective on your work—techniques like editing in a different environment than where you wrote, changing the font when you read it back, hanging it up on a laundry line to look for big picture issues.
Even though I didn’t love the second half, the book was easy to get through, which isn’t always true of writing books. (As my shelf of 20+ unread writing books can attest.)
I’ll leave you with one of the practical tips that stuck with me:
Take care not to indiscriminately repeat a turn of phrase. Avoid, that is, overusing one particular sentence structure, such as, for example, a clause, then a colon, then a list. Single out the structure you unwittingly repeat, enter it in a notebook marked “patterns to break,” and make it the only thing you look for on one or two read-throughs. Hunt down your habit, and train your mind to flinch at it.
Have you ever tried looking for just one thing during a read-through?
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