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Brain Tired

Nov 29, 2009 Posted by: Kelly | Filed under: Writing

I won!

I’m going to take a couple days off to celebrate and sleep and say more than two words at a time to my family. But until normal life resumes, I had to share this with everyone who’s been cheering me on from afar.

I didn’t even hit 10,000 words until November 20th. But then I went and finished a day early.

Although, for future reference, I can’t say I’d recommend the “80% in 10 days” technique. Squeezing those last few thousand from my poor, numb fingers was more painful than…I don’t know what. I just wrote enough metaphors for a year, so I have none left for you right now.

Thanks to everyone who cheered me on. But a special thanks to my hubby Erik for taking the lion’s share of parenting duties these last 10 days so I could live out my dream of being a Comeback Queen.

Final official total: 50,079.

Progress Report

Nov 22, 2009 Posted by: Kelly | Filed under: Writing

My efforts for NaNoWriMo this year have been less than ideal. A cold that traveled from one family member to another and an out-of-town work conference conspired to bring me down. But I’m determined to not give up.

Days Left: 9
Words Written: 12,159
Words Left to Write: 37,841
Approximate Number of Hours That Equates To: 38

I plan to write at least 8 hours a day tomorrow and both days next weekend, then that leaves only 14 hours in 6 weekdays. Thank goodness I have use-it-or-lose-it vacation hours I can burn next week.

After I finish this novel—and I will finish—then I can tackle the stack of finished but unreviewed books on my kitchen counter.

Can you trust me? Compare our taste!

Title: My Big Nose and Other Natural Disasters
Author: Sydney Salter
Category: Fiction, Young Adult
Why I Read It: I went to a writing workshop where this book was recommended.

Summary: Soon-to-be-a-senior Jory has a Super Schnozz, so she gets a job and starts saving up money for plastic surgery. Maybe then Tyler Briggs will notice her.

Stopped on Page: 22
Why I Stopped: Another casualty of that string of great books. This may be a good book, but for me, it didn’t compare to the ones I’d just finished.

The main reason I stopped reading is that the voice sounded too young for a girl who’s about to be a senior. An example, where Jory is talking about getting to borrow the family minivan after having an accident in her car:

I was still slightly shocked that Mom had let me drop her off at work early and borrow the minivan. Like I keep saying, it was an accident! I thought I was hitting the brakes, but I was hitting the gas instead. It was only in the movie-theater parking lot, and I totally blame the guy for looking like Tyler Briggs. Really, it was no big deal. Except that I lost my car. One little mistake and my car becomes too expensive to insure. (You’d think the Mercedes I hit would’ve had a sturdier bumper!)

Your Turn: Should I have kept going? Or was I right to stop?

Note: As an aspiring author, I respect the extraordinary amount of effort that goes into writing a book. I did not write this review in order to be unfair or negative about the book. My goal is simply to articulate why the book wasn’t for me.

Unfinished: The Truth about Forever

Nov 2, 2009 Posted by: Kelly | Filed under: Unfinished Reviews
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Can you trust me? Compare our taste!

Audience Pick!

Title: The Truth about Forever
Author: Sarah Dessen
Category: Fiction, Young Adult
Why I Read It: Because you told me to!

Summary: 16-year-old Macy just lost her father. Unlike her older sister, she didn’t let her grief show. She was the one who kept it all together. She has a safe boyfriend, a safe summer job, a safe life. So why would she trade all that in for a job with a chaotic catering company?

Stopped on Page: 82
Why I Stopped: I usually enjoy Dessen’s books. But after a string of books that nearly destroyed my will to write, I couldn’t get into this one.

Reasons I couldn’t get into this book:

  • You’re tellin’ me—I felt like I was getting told a whole lot without being able to see and discover things for myself.
  • Flashback whiplash—They made it hard to get into the here and now of Macy’s life.
  • Romantic let-down—When I started this book, I was expecting a good romance. But by page 82, Macy had just noticed a cute boy and they hadn’t had much real interaction. I wanted things to move a little faster in that department.

Still, I will probably go back to this one someday. The timing just wasn’t right this go-round.

Your Turn: Should I have kept going? Or was I right to stop?

Note: As an aspiring author, I respect the extraordinary amount of effort that goes into writing a book. I did not write this review in order to be unfair or negative about the book. My goal is simply to articulate why the book wasn’t for me.