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The Perfect Writing Retreat

Kelly — Thu, 10 Jun 2010 21:45:28 +0000

Ever since I let a couple large projects at work disrupt my writing routine, I’ve been in a bit of a slump. For example—and it physically hurts me to admit this to the world—I am still working on revising my most recent novel so I can cash in on that agent referral I got in late January.

Yesterday, my husband offered to take care of our daughter one weekend so I can take off for a writing retreat.

Best. Husband. Ever.

But planning my writing retreat has proven to be yet another effective distraction from actually writing. So to get it out of my system, here’s a peek into my daydreams:

A turret. I’ve always wanted my very own writing turret. Preferably with a wrap-around balcony.
Room service. I don’t want to change out of my jammies. This is a must.
No temptations. TV, Internet access, a comfortable bed—all no-nos at my writing retreat.
Ingrid. I’ve never been the type to write with music playing in the background, but lately I’ve made an exception for Ingrid Michaelson. Give her a listen, you’ll see why.

Your Turn

What would your most perfect writing retreat look like?

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7 Writing Rules Gleaned from a Year of Voracious Reading

Kelly — Mon, 22 Feb 2010 04:00:30 +0000

The Guardian posted a collection of rules for writing fiction from authors like Margaret Atwood, Neil Gaiman, and Philip Pullman. I read these rules over the course of a day so the words of wisdom would have a better chance of sinking in. Here’s my eloquent summary of one rule that cropped up over and over on the authors’ lists: Read a lot.

I can attest to that. A year of book blogging in which I read more books than ever has taught me more than any writing how-to book or writers’ conference.

After reading the Guardian article, I allowed myself to fantasize about one day being a published author and being asked to provide my own list of writing rules. Would I offer practical advice like Elmore Leonard? Be funny like Roddy Doyle—or a stick-in-the-mud like Philip Pullman?

I decided to find out.

My Rules for Writing…Or for Dating, Take Your Pick

1. First impressions count. This is the rule that trumps all others. If the reader doesn’t connect with your main character—if she doesn’t empathize with what your character’s going through—you’ve lost her. Some ways we push our readers away without realizing it:

Switching the point of view makes it harder to truly connect to any one character, let alone multiple.
Introducing too many characters all at once takes the focus off the main character.
Playing into a stereotype makes the character less real—less of a person.

2. Don’t be shy. In this world of instant gratification, readers want something to happen right away. So ditch the prologue and the first chapter full of backstory and jump right into the good stuff. You can sprinkle the backstory in later. Likewise, make sure your main character does something early on that involves more than just reacting to what others are doing.

3. Do be mysterious. Can you imagine if the first chapter of When You Reach Me explained who was sending the notes and what they meant? No fun in that. Our job is to create a sense of wonder in the reader. This goes for the main character’s thoughts and feelings, too. We don’t need to tell the reader every single thought that flits through the character’s head. Use their actions and dialogue to show how they’re feeling.

4. Keep the drama in check. Soap operas don’t work so well on paper, at least not for me. Cut the melodrama, or tone it down. Try reading an emotional scene out loud to find the parts that are over-the-top. Instead of having a character talk about their emotions, put them in a scene where their actions can reflect how they’re feeling. The character might still have to hint at their emotions, but at least they won’t come off like a drama queen.

5. Live in the present. Much like the person you’re dating won’t appreciate frequent trips down the memory lane of your previous relationships, the reader will get tired of frequent flashbacks. It can also quickly get confusing about what’s happening now versus then. If you do include a flashback, keep it short and make it clear when it’s over.

6. Listen to your heart. Your main character’s parents and teachers may very well have good advice. Even so, she’ll have to learn those lessons for herself the hard way. Not only does it make for a more interesting story, but a character empowered to solve her own problems is hella inspiring. Scrutinize every piece of dialogue coming out of an authority figure’s mouth to make sure they’re not giving all the answers.

7. Don’t forget to have fun. Play with language to keep your writing fresh and sharp. Do a crossword puzzle every day, or subscribe to a word-of-the-day newsletter. Pull out a writing book and use a prompt or an exercise. Stretching your brain to use language in new ways will pay off.

Your Turn

What would be on your list of writing rules? Do you disagree with anything on my list or in the Guardian article?

And if you’re looking for even more rules, check out:

Or maybe you just think all this rules business is a bunch of hooey?

Photos by Professor Bop and 365bunnies.

The Second Quarter, It Is Nigh

Kelly — Mon, 15 Feb 2010 05:30:38 +0000

On Sunday morning, my almost-2-year-old daughter and I bundled up in jackets and hats and mittens—because it was in the 50s, and we Texans are wusses about cold weather—and we walked to the end of our block to watch the Austin Marathon. We set up camp at about the 70% mark with some neighbors and friends, cheering runners on for three hours straight.

I just passed the 25% mark of my own personal marathon: my 8-week revision plan. As I yelled out the names of complete strangers yesterday, I fantasized about getting some hot pink puffy paint to write my name on a t-shirt and walking down the street with my laptop on a rolling cart, hordes of friends and fellow writers screaming my name out and encouraging me to keep going.

But then I remembered that I can’t even stand it when my husband reads over my shoulder while I write. So that would foster some serious performance anxiety. And who really wants to be picking at pink paint stains under their fingernails for days after?

How Far I’ve Come

I started a spreadsheet to track my progress, which I know will come as a shock. But the prospect of revising my first draft has been so overwhelming that I wanted to quantify the actual amount of effort it takes from me. Then next time, I’ll know about how long a full revision might take.

Some fun stats for you:

On average, I’m spending about an hour a day working on my novel. Or, to be exact: 1.074358974.
I started out with 49,944 words. I now have 46,652. So I’ve lost about 6% of my total words.
I set out to write a 1-page plot synopsis and ended up with 4 pages.
After finishing my first read-through of the entire draft, I’m in the process of entering easy edits and recording harder ones for later. I’m about 57% through my marked-up copy.

What’s Down the Road

Short answer? A whole heck of a lot. Probably more than 75%, if I’m being honest with myself. My goal is to increase my daily effort to at least 1.5 hours to get back on track.

Your Turn

What project are you working on right now—writing, home improvement, or otherwise—and how’s it going?

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The Critique That Rocked My World

Kelly — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 01:51:34 +0000

On Saturday, I attended the annual conference put together by Austin’s chapter of the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators. As with all the SCBWI conferences I’ve attended the last few years, this one gave me a much-needed jolt of inspiration.

But this time, something happened that’s never happened before.

I registered to get 6 critiques of my manuscript. That’s not the new part. I always try to snag a critique slot. But I should have submitted my NaNoWriMo 2008 manuscript—you know, the one that’s actually been edited. But I was still riding the high from my NaNoWriMo 2009 win and completely in love with it, even in its unedited rawness. So I chose the first 10 pages of that zero draft to submit for my critiques. All 6 of them.

Flash forward a month. I sat down across the reviewer for my first critique. And it quickly became clear that I made a grave mistake in submitting my newest manuscript. Duh, right? Lesson learned.

Still, the critiques—especially those from published authors—lit the foggy path of revision.

And then. I was in my last critique of the day with an author. An award-winning author. She showered me in encouragement. She had suggestions for improvement but also pointed out the parts she loved and the things I do well. She wanted to hear where the story was going.

Then she pulled out a sheet of paper and started writing on the back of it.

“I’m writing down my agent’s contact information,” she said. “I want you to do one revision and then submit this to her.”

It took all my strength to pry my jaw from the floor and force my mouth into a coherent “thank you.”

She saw enough goodness in my zero-draft writing to give me this gift. A gift of motivation, a gift of support, a gift of a DEADLINE. Because I know this opportunity will expire if I let it.

This is a small step, I know. But it’s the first glimmer of success I’ve had on my road to publication. So I’m going to bask a teensy bit before I get to work.

Your Turn

Do you have advice for how to revise a NaNoWriMo draft in, say, 8 weeks? Or for how to get my head out of the clouds and in the revision game?

Photos by RIPizzo and Saparevo.

I Am an Orderly Sort of Person

Kelly — Wed, 27 Jan 2010 05:03:45 +0000

On my kitchen counter, I have a stack of 14 books I’ve read but not yet written reviews for. They’re stacked in the order I read them because I always write reviews in the order I’ve read the books. But with 99% of my books coming from the library, that means I come up against library due dates.

Tomorrow, two of my unreviewed 14 are due back to the library. Those two happen to be my most recent reads. My brain is not happy right now.

I pulled the two books out from the bottom of the stack tonight. In the process, the book on the top launched itself right off the pile and onto the floor. I think the poor thing succumbed to the depression of being passed up for the latest hot young number.

Every time I pick up one of those two books with the intention of starting a review, I set it right back down again. And instead of writing the reviews so I can return the books due tomorrow, here I am pontificating about the odd habits of my brain.

Must. Write. Reviews. Now.

I think I’ll just pay the fine.

Your Turn

What does your brain insist you do in order? Or are you the type to jump around? And in your professional opinion, am I neurotic?

p.s. Would you change your answer if I told you that in the photo above, the fact that the bottom plate is pushed further in than the top plate bugs me to no end? And the utensils on the bottom plate aren’t exactly straight. And only one apple has its stem. And…

Photo by pinelife.

Progress Report

One Year Ago Today…

Kelly — Mon, 18 Jan 2010 15:35:31 +0000

I posted my first review to this site. I had been spamming all my friends and family with one to two YA reviews a week on our family blog. The poor things subscribed to see cute pictures of my baby girl, and I was inundating them with talk of books. Teen books, no less.

In the past year, I’ve learned a lot from you, from other book bloggers, from the books I’ve read, and just from the process of articulating my thoughts on all things YA. But mostly I’ve just learned how much I have yet to learn.

Ultimately, I started this blog to improve my writing, and to share what I learned with others. In a year, I can tell you I’ve definitely come a long way in my own writing.

But you’ll have to tell me whether I hit the mark on the other front. What have you learned from what I’ve written? (Please don’t say you’ve learned that I’m a no-nothing hack with crap taste in books.) What ideas have you gotten from this blog—books to read, ways to write, or anything else?

You are why I do this. Even if all I’ve ever given you is one good book recommendation, I’ll be happy.

No fancy first-birthday hoopla today. But just you wait til Thursday. Just you wait.

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7 Writing Rules Gleaned from a Year of Voracious Reading

New Love

Kelly — Mon, 28 Dec 2009 06:03:17 +0000

After the craziness of this year’s NaNoWriMo, I decided to put myself on a writing hiatus for the month of December. But the thing with hiatuses (hiati?) is that one day, they end.

With January nipping at my heels, I’ve started thinking about what I’ll tackle first. The options:

Pick up where I left off in the third rewrite of last year’s NaNo novel. Currently at 6,421 words in the rewrite, compared to 51,358 in the first draft.
Read this year’s novel and start revisions.

Even though I have about 90% left to go in my rewrite of last year’s novel, the logical thing would be to go back to that because at least I’m on the third rewrite and not the first one.

But—please don’t tell my first novel—I’m not sure the spark is there anymore. This new hussy of a novel sashayed her way into my life, and every time I think about my first January of the aught persuasion, it’s her I imagine spending it with.

I’m just afraid that if I don’t go back to my first now, I never will.

Who should win out: Logic or love?

Photo by Anna Gay.

Brain Tired

Kelly — Mon, 30 Nov 2009 00:49:50 +0000

I’m going to take a couple days off to celebrate and sleep and say more than two words at a time to my family. But until normal life resumes, I had to share this with everyone who’s been cheering me on from afar.

I didn’t even hit 10,000 words until November 20th. But then I went and finished a day early.

Although, for future reference, I can’t say I’d recommend the “80% in 10 days” technique. Squeezing those last few thousand from my poor, numb fingers was more painful than…I don’t know what. I just wrote enough metaphors for a year, so I have none left for you right now.

Thanks to everyone who cheered me on. But a special thanks to my hubby Erik for taking the lion’s share of parenting duties these last 10 days so I could live out my dream of being a Comeback Queen.

Final official total: 50,079.

Progress Report

Progress Report

Kelly — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 19:48:45 +0000

My efforts for NaNoWriMo this year have been less than ideal. A cold that traveled from one family member to another and an out-of-town work conference conspired to bring me down. But I’m determined to not give up.

Days Left: 9
Words Written: 12,159
Words Left to Write: 37,841
Approximate Number of Hours That Equates To: 38

I plan to write at least 8 hours a day tomorrow and both days next weekend, then that leaves only 14 hours in 6 weekdays. Thank goodness I have use-it-or-lose-it vacation hours I can burn next week.

After I finish this novel—and I will finish—then I can tackle the stack of finished but unreviewed books on my kitchen counter.

How Great Books Destroy Me

Kelly — Thu, 15 Oct 2009 15:47:26 +0000

I’ve just hit a string of awesome books. Reviews are forthcoming, but the titles don’t really matter. What matters is that the writing is so good, it hurts.

Let me explain. I’m currently slogging away at my third attempt to rewrite last year’s NaNoWriMo first draft. Meanwhile, this year’s NaNoWriMo is reading the revisions over my shoulder, biding its time to kick my work in progress out of the way. So when I’m reading and a brilliant piece of writing makes me stop in awe, my very next thought is: “I’ll never be this good.”

Sure, no one’s that good on their first draft. What about their third draft? Does Laurie Halse Anderson see inklings of her final masterpiece by the third draft? Because in my third draft, no inklings. The voice isn’t fresh. The style is middle-of-the-road. And as I discovered in a writing workshop this weekend, my descriptions are practically nonexistent. When I do add description, it’s certainly nowhere along the lines of what I most admire:

I shiver and hustle to my sad excuse of a motor vehicle, a Yugo named Bert.

I usually drive to school on autopilot. Not today—leaving late has landed me smack in the middle of rush-hour traffic. This is bad. Bert fears traffic. Bert is a wuss, a tissue box on tires with a bulimic hunger for motor oil. I pet the dashboard as I turn onto the main road, and promise him a filter change if he can get me to school without overheating.

A bulimic hunger for motor oil? Dang.

Maybe I shouldn’t be comparing myself to the likes of LHA and Suzanne Collins and Melina Marchetta. But I want to write something that I think is great. If I think what I’ve created is just okay, why bother putting it out into the world?

If I’m being honest with myself, my writing is sometimes good, sometimes mediocre, sometimes bad. I can find the mediocre and bad patches and fix them. But how do you take yourself from good to great?

In my book reviews, I try to articulate what I admired and didn’t enjoy about each book, in the hopes that the process will help me with my own writing (and yours as well). And it is helping, for me at least. But not enough. I need to do something more proactive to take my writing to the next level. But I have no idea how to do that. Help!

Your Turn: What steps have you taken to get your writing to the next level?

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